BLETCHLEY, thaddeus liam

[thaddeus]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, vertical-align: top;][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][STYLE=border-right: 3px solid #365F88; width: 130px;][STYLE=background-image: url(http://oi45.tinypic.com/6i4coy.jpg); border-radius: 20 0 0 20; -moz-border-radius: 20 0 0 20; -webkit-border-radius: 20 0 0 20; -ms-border-radius: 20 0 0 20; -khtml-border-radius: 20 0 0 20; padding: 10 5 10 5; width: 120px; font-size: 11px; font-family: georgia; text-align: justify; color: #dedede] [STYLE=text-align: center; font: 20px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px;]INTRO:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]NAME:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]NICKNAMES:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]AGE:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]BIRTHDAY:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]WAND:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]ABILITIES:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]OCCUPATION:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]HOUSE:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]FACE CLAIM:[/style] [/style][/style]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, vertical-align: top;][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][STYLE=width: 250px; font-size: 11px; font-family: georgia; text-align: justify; color: #dedede][STYLE=background-image: url(http://oi45.tinypic.com/6i4coy.jpg); border-radius: 0 40 0 40; -moz-border-radius: 0 40 0 40; -webkit-border-radius: 0 40 0 40; -khtml-border-radius: 0 40 0 40; -ms-border-radius: 0 40 0 40; padding: 10 10 10 10; width: 240px;][STYLE=text-align: right; font: 25px georgia; width: 220px; margin-bottom: -10px;]PERSONALITY:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]LIKES:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]DISLIKES:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]DEMENTOR:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]BOGGART:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]PATRONUS:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]GOALS:[/style] -Raise a well respected pureblood family. (Carry down the name) -Follow his fathers wishes. -Work within the ministry. Something simple, yet well known. [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]SECRETS:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]PERSONALITY:[/style] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [STYLE=text-align: right; font: 25px georgia; width: 220px; margin-bottom: -10px;]HISTORY:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]BLOOD STATUS:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]MOTHER:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]FATHER:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]SIBLINGS:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]OTHER:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]PETS:[/style] Owl, Thad [XD] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]HOMETOWN:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]THE STORY:[/style] [/style][/style]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, vertical-align: bottom;][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true] [STYLE=background-image: url(http://oi45.tinypic.com/6i4coy.jpg); border-radius: 0 20 20 0; -moz-border-radius: 0 20 20 0; -webkit-border-radius: 0 20 20 0; -ms-border-radius: 0 20 20 0; -khtml-border-radius: 0 20 20 0; padding: 0 10 0 10; width: 120px; font-size: 11px; font-family: georgia; text-align: justify; color: #dedede][STYLE=border-left: 3px solid #365F88; width: 100px;] [STYLE=[STYLE=border-left: 12px solid #365F88; width: 100px; text-align: center; font: 20px georgia; margin-bottom: -10px;]OOC:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]ALIAS:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]EXPERIENCE:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]OTHER BABIES:[/style] [STYLE=text-align: left; font: 14px georgia; width: 115px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;]CODE WORD:[/style] [/style][/style]

[sorting hat]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, vertical-align: top;][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][STYLE=width: 350px; font-size: 10px; font-family: georgia; text-align: justify; color: #dedede][STYLE=background-image: url(http://oi45.tinypic.com/6i4coy.jpg); border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -moz-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -webkit-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -khtml-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -ms-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; padding: 10 10 10 10; width: 350px;][STYLE=text-align: center; font: 30px georgia; width: 350px; margin-bottom: -10px;]PENDING[/style] [STYLE=text-align: center; font: 11px georgia; width: 350px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;] hey, becca! i'm afraid that there are a few things we need fixed/cleared up before we can accept thaddeus. for his wand... here is a list of the wand cores and woods that we allow on teog, and i'm afraid that serpent scale is not one of them, nor is the wood. you can choose from anything on that list but acromantula web, chimera scale, and basilisk skin, but we'd like for you to stick to the wands supplied, please. students may only have summer jobs at regular shops, nothing at the ministry. in fact, even graduates from hogwarts may not be unspeakable because it is such a secretive, important job those who aren't trusted (and fresh hogwarts graduates would need to earn trust) cannot be unspeakables, so i'm afraid that that doesn't work. sorry. =\ you make mention in his personality of his mother dying when he was young, but nothing of the sort happens in his history? i could just be missing it, but could you clear that up for me? now... this is probably the big thing, and the thing that most conflicts with his character as i ask you to change it- his father. the guy can be evil, yes, and he can practice dark arts and things like that, but i'm afraid that i have serious issues with him being a man who, apparently, tortures and murders a random wizard for fun. the aurors are not fools, the wizarding world has been peaceful of all major dark wizards for quite some time and if he randomly kills he would have been caught and sent to azkaban. his crimes without any sort of consequences is, frankly, rather unrealistic. is there some other way thaddeus could be affected so by his father's actions? maybe his dad just beat someone up without the killing part? =\ i think that's it. ^^ i might advise using the proboards spell checker, quickly, as there were a few errors i could quickly see, but it's not mandatory. ^^ let pepper or i know in the chat, or pm our admin account, when finished or if you have any questions. [/style] [/style]

[sorting hat]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, vertical-align: top;][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][STYLE=width: 350px; font-size: 10px; font-family: georgia; text-align: justify; color: #dedede][STYLE=background-image: url(http://oi45.tinypic.com/6i4coy.jpg); border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -moz-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -webkit-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -khtml-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; -ms-border-radius: 40 40 40 40; padding: 10 10 10 10; width: 350px;][STYLE=text-align: center; font: 30px georgia; width: 350px; margin-bottom: -10px;]• ACCEPTED ![/style] [STYLE=text-align: center; font: 11px georgia; width: 350px; margin-bottom: -10px; color: A2A2A2;] there's one last mention of his mother's death in his personality, under 'aggressive', that you should fix up, but other than that he looks good. ^^ make your claims and have fun! [/style] [/style]